Hi ! I love games that know how to make the characters endearing and break the fourth wall! This game looks perfect! I will test it and give you some news!
I liked the way the story was being told. it was like getting the player involve in it, but after the dark forest there wasn't much of involvement of the player like the start. and maybe a little short for showing the idea you've got
Thanks for trying the game out! Appreciate you sharing the video for your playthrough too, it's so helpful to get a visual of other people playing the game and seeing how they interact with things. I definitely agree that there isn't much to do as of now. I'm still very new to RPG Maker and this is my first game so I pretty much just wanted to get some feedback on the direction of the story and writing to see if people even like the basic concept before I dump hundreds of hours into development.
I have added some more to the game since this upload though, primarily in the town. I'll be uploading another update shortly after the Spooktacular Spooktober contest is done. :)
I really do love your music, a lot of the tracks fit the broken game theme perfectly. I'm actually going to be posting an update later tonight. Still just in the demo phase but there will be a decent amount more than there is now. Thanks for checking it out!
Thank you! By the way, do you have a discord account? Maybe we could stay in contact, because I really like the idea of your project. It has great potential. Especially the newest version has a great story. :D
Sorry it took so long for me to respond. My mother passed away a few weeks ago so I've been kind of stretched thin lately. I do have a discord and it's the same username as here (Jennavieve).
Oh, sad to hear that. My sympathies. I hope you can handle your big loss. About Discord, I'll send you my name, because you seem to have forgotten to send me your Discord id. It is understandable, that you've forgotten the number behind your user name, because you have a hard time now. Because of this I send you my discord name, so you can contact me, when you feel ready.
Thank you. I actually didn't write the number because I didn't know you needed it lol. Sorry about that. I pretty much only use discord to play jackbox with my friends. I'll add you the next time I'm on.
Thanks so much for trying it out! It's funny that you mention the organ too because I literally just finished adding that to the game. I never thought about the number of lines in the text boxes either. I'll try that out later. I'd love to add some lighting too but I gotta figure out how to do all that first lol. Appreciate you sharing your thoughts. :)
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Hi ! I love games that know how to make the characters endearing and break the fourth wall! This game looks perfect! I will test it and give you some news!
I liked the way the story was being told. it was like getting the player involve in it, but after the dark forest there wasn't much of involvement of the player like the start. and maybe a little short for showing the idea you've got
Thanks for trying the game out! Appreciate you sharing the video for your playthrough too, it's so helpful to get a visual of other people playing the game and seeing how they interact with things. I definitely agree that there isn't much to do as of now. I'm still very new to RPG Maker and this is my first game so I pretty much just wanted to get some feedback on the direction of the story and writing to see if people even like the basic concept before I dump hundreds of hours into development.
I have added some more to the game since this upload though, primarily in the town. I'll be uploading another update shortly after the Spooktacular Spooktober contest is done. :)
Hello, I've played your little game and I'm glad my music is fitting for the scenery. I'll stay tuned to future versions of your project. :D
I really do love your music, a lot of the tracks fit the broken game theme perfectly. I'm actually going to be posting an update later tonight. Still just in the demo phase but there will be a decent amount more than there is now. Thanks for checking it out!
Thank you! By the way, do you have a discord account? Maybe we could stay in contact, because I really like the idea of your project. It has great potential. Especially the newest version has a great story. :D
Sorry it took so long for me to respond. My mother passed away a few weeks ago so I've been kind of stretched thin lately. I do have a discord and it's the same username as here (Jennavieve).
Oh, sad to hear that. My sympathies. I hope you can handle your big loss. About Discord, I'll send you my name, because you seem to have forgotten to send me your Discord id. It is understandable, that you've forgotten the number behind your user name, because you have a hard time now. Because of this I send you my discord name, so you can contact me, when you feel ready.
My Discord name: Eric the Funny Baron#4168
Thank you. I actually didn't write the number because I didn't know you needed it lol. Sorry about that. I pretty much only use discord to play jackbox with my friends. I'll add you the next time I'm on.
Looking good so far.
I'm disappointed that Stefan wouldn't let me play the organ : ^(
(there's even an organ.ogg SE or ME perfect for impromptu playing)
It may just be me, but when I only have 1 or 2 lines in a text window, I leave line 1 blank to vertically center the dialogue lines in the window.
Maybe add some debris in the larger maps to enhance the appearance of rot and decay.
When you get to the polish phase, consider parallax lighting. The first map would really pop with light around the lamps and windows.
Thanks so much for trying it out! It's funny that you mention the organ too because I literally just finished adding that to the game. I never thought about the number of lines in the text boxes either. I'll try that out later. I'd love to add some lighting too but I gotta figure out how to do all that first lol. Appreciate you sharing your thoughts. :)